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Back Porch Writer's avatar

I don't remember the translation I read in college, but it wasn't as exciting as yours, Ms. Mary.

Minor quibble: falcons are birds of prey, along with eagles, hawks, kites, and owls. Suggestion: swap "bird of prey" with "songbird." When my wife and I lived in Japan, there was a peregrine falcon that lived on our balcony. Many a time, it would feed on the songbirds of the fields near our house.

Once upon a time, I wanted to be an ornithologist. 🤷‍♂️

Jordan Nuttall's avatar

You’re a fantastic author Mary, thank you!.

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