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Redd Oscar's avatar

There was a good depth to this, the strange gentleness of the tribe, the, understandable, untrusting nature of the stranger. Glossing over the fight scenes helped set that tone too. Thanks for sharing.

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Interesting Story. Odd, when I read it, I wasn't thinking Bronze Age, I was thinking post-apocalypse, for some reason. Maybe it was the names. My inner story-teller was wondering what the next story was about.

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