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maryh10000's avatar

Yeah, my writing background is fanfic. More like what we call a "one shot" than a true short story, I think.

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Back Porch Writer's avatar

I loved it. I had to follow you here from the Discord.

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James Copley's avatar

A good start, could work as a prologue. This could easily be expanded into at least a novella, you’d just have to figure out a plot.

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maryh10000's avatar

One idea I bounced around for a while was Rayna, Lijah, and Molly somehow as superheroes. Maybe Rayna is already, and the other two get recruited. But that didn't go anywhere.

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Von's avatar

Fascinating. Doesn't really come to a point... seems like a non-fiction article in fiction format.

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Caroline Furlong's avatar

Bravo! Oh, bravo, Mary! That was excellent!!!! :D

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